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1 1. Remember: you are writing for an expert. Cross out all that is trivial or routine. 2 3 2. Avoid repetition: do not repeat the assumptions of a theorem at the beginning of its proof, or a complicated conclusion at the end of the proof. Do not repeat the assumptionos of a previous theorem in the statement of a next one (instand, write e.g."Under the hypotheses of Theorem 1 with f replaced by g,....."). Do not repeat the same formula -- use a label instead. 4 5 3. Check all formulas: is each of them necessary?
We denote by $\mathbb{R}$ the set of all real numbers.
We have the following lemma.
The following lemma will be useful.
...... the following inequality is satisfied：
We denote by $\mathbb{R}$ the set of all real numbers.
We have the following lemma.
The following lemma will be useful.
...... the following inequality is satisfied：
1 Let $\varepsilon$ be an arbitrary but fixed positive number $\Rrightarrow$ Fix $\varepsilon>0$ 2 3 4 5 Let us fix arbitrarily $x\in X$ $\Rrightarrow$ Fix $x\in X$ 6 7 8 9 Let us first observe that $\Rrightarrow$ First observe that 10 11 12 13 We will first compute $\Rrightarrow$ We first compute 14 15 16 17 Hence we have $x=1$ $\Rrightarrow$ Hence $x=1$ 18 19 20 21 Hence it follows that $x=1$ $\Rrightarrow$ Hence $x=1$ 22 23 24 25 Taking into account (4) $\Rrightarrow$ By (4) 26 27 28 29 By virtue of (4) $\Rrightarrow$ By (4) 30 31 32 33 By relation (4) $\Rrightarrow$ By (4) 34 35 36 37 In the interval $[0,1]$ $\Rrightarrow$ in $[0,1]$ 38 39 40 41 There exists a function $f\in C(X)$ $\Rrightarrow$ There exists $f\in C(X)$ 42 43 44 45 For every point $p\in M$ $\Rrightarrow$ For every $p\in M$ 46 47 48 49 It is defined by the formula $F(x)=......$ $\Rrightarrow$ It is defined by $F(x)=......$ 50 51 52 53 Theorem 2 and Theorem 5 $\Rrightarrow$ Theorems 2 and 5 54 55 56 57 This follows from (4),(5),(6) and (7) $\Rrightarrow$ This follows from (4)-(7) 58 59 60 61 For details see [3],[4] and [5] $\Rrightarrow$ For details see [3]-[5] 62 63 64 65 The derivative with respect to $t$ $\Rrightarrow$ The $t-$ derivative 66 67 68 69 A function of class $C^2$ $\Rrightarrow$ A $C^2$ function 70 71 72 73 For arbitrary $x$ $\Rrightarrow$ For all $x$ (For every $x$) 74 75 76 77 In the case $n=5$ $\Rrightarrow$ For $n=5$ 78 79 80 81 This leads to a constradiction with the maximality of $f$ $\Rrightarrow$ .....,contrary to the maximality of $f$ 82 83 84 85 Applying Lemma 1 we conclude that $\Rrightarrow$ Lemma 1 shows that ......, which completes the proof $\Rrightarrow$ .......$\Box$
Let $\varepsilon$ be an arbitrary but fixed positive number $\Rrightarrow$ Fix $\varepsilon>0$
Let us fix arbitrarily $x\in X$ $\Rrightarrow$ Fix $x\in X$
Let us first observe that $\Rrightarrow$ First observe that
We will first compute $\Rrightarrow$ We first compute
Hence we have $x=1$ $\Rrightarrow$ Hence $x=1$
Hence it follows that $x=1$ $\Rrightarrow$ Hence $x=1$
Taking into account (4) $\Rrightarrow$ By (4)
By virtue of (4) $\Rrightarrow$ By (4)
By relation (4) $\Rrightarrow$ By (4)
In the interval $[0,1]$ $\Rrightarrow$ in $[0,1]$
There exists a function $f\in C(X)$ $\Rrightarrow$ There exists $f\in C(X)$
For every point $p\in M$ $\Rrightarrow$ For every $p\in M$
It is defined by the formula $F(x)=......$ $\Rrightarrow$ It is defined by $F(x)=......$
Theorem 2 and Theorem 5 $\Rrightarrow$ Theorems 2 and 5
This follows from (4),(5),(6) and (7) $\Rrightarrow$ This follows from (4)-(7)
For details see [3],[4] and [5] $\Rrightarrow$ For details see [3]-[5]
The derivative with respect to $t$ $\Rrightarrow$ The $t-$ derivative
A function of class $C^2$ $\Rrightarrow$ A $C^2$ function
For arbitrary $x$ $\Rrightarrow$ For all $x$ (For every $x$)
In the case $n=5$ $\Rrightarrow$ For $n=5$
This leads to a constradiction with the maximality of $f$ $\Rrightarrow$ .....,contrary to the maximality of $f$
Applying Lemma 1 we conclude that $\Rrightarrow$ Lemma 1 shows that ......, which completes the proof $\Rrightarrow$ .......$\Box$
