审稿意见回复

论文在返修阶段，会收到2-3个审稿人的审稿意见，普遍是大修+小修，审稿人会对文章进行一个总的点评，包括优势和缺陷，然后逐条列出意见，回复的时候也需要对意见进行逐条回复解答，并写明在原文何处进行了补充修改，标为红色/蓝色/高亮等。修回时提交审稿意见回复和修改后的手稿。这篇提供一些审稿意见回复模板供大家参考。

开头与结尾的写法

开头：

• We appreciate the /Thank you very much for the excellent/ encouraging/ kind/ positive/constructive comments/ suggestions/ recommendation/ remarks.(我们非常感谢/非常感谢您优秀的/鼓舞人心的/友好的/积极的/建设性的意见/建议/推荐/评论。)
• We sincerely thank the reviewer for thoroughly examining our manuscript and providing very helpful comments to guide our revision.(我们真诚地感谢审稿人对我们的稿件进行了彻底的检查，并提供了非常有用的意见来指导我们的修改。)
• Sincere thanks should be given to the reviewer for the constructive comments and suggestions. The responses to the comments are given below.(对审稿人提出的建设性意见和建议表示衷心的感谢。对这些评论的回应如下。)

开头后表明立场：

• We have tried our best to revise the manuscript according to your kind and construction comments and suggestions.(根据您的善意和施工意见和建议，我们已经尽了最大的努力修改稿件。)
• Please find the following detailed responses to your comments and suggestions. We sincerely hope that this revised manuscript has addressed all your comments and suggestions.(请参阅以下对您的意见和建议的详细回应。我们真诚地希望这份修改后的手稿已经解决了您所有的意见和建议。)
• We have provided a point-by-point response to the reviewers' comments below in blue color.(我们在下面用蓝色对评论者的评论进行了逐点回复。)
• Our response to the questions are shown below./ We have addressed each point below.(我们对这些问题的回答如下。/我们在下面逐一说明。)
• We have collected more data and included detailed discussions to address the reviewer’s main concerns.(我们收集了更多的数据，包括详细的讨论，以解决审稿人的主要问题)

结尾：

• We sincerely hope that this revised manuscript has addressed all your comments and suggestions. We appreciated for reviewers’ warm work earnestly, and hope that the correction will meet with approval. Once again, thank you very much for your comments and suggestions.(我们真诚地希望这份修改后的手稿已经解决了您所有的意见和建议。我们对审稿人的热情工作表示诚挚的感谢，希望此次修改能够得到批准。再次感谢您的意见和建议)
• We would like to thank the referee again for taking the time to review our manuscript.(再次感谢审稿人抽出时间审阅我们的稿件。)

答复具体问题

回答问题的开头

• Yes, we agree…/ We fully agree with the reviewer that(是的，我们同意…/我们完全同意审稿人的观点)
• To address the reviewer’s concern, …(为了解决审稿人的担忧，…)
• Thanks a lot for the reviewer’s comments. …(非常感谢审稿人的意见。…)
• Thank the reviewer for the constructive comments and suggestions. Yes…(感谢审稿人提出的建设性意见和建议。是的……)

要求补充内容

• To verify the effect of XXX modification on the structure of XXX, we supplemented the xxx. Thanks for your kind suggestions, which is valuable for improving the accuracy of the manuscript. More discussions/data/details/descriptions/information/ have been included in the revised manuscript.(为了验证XXX修改对XXX结构的影响，我们补充了XXX。感谢您的友好建议，这对提高稿件的准确性很有价值。更多的讨论/数据/细节/描述/信息/已包含在修订的原稿中。)

要求调整说法

• We’ve changed [original text] to [edited text] (page 5, line 24)(我们已将[原始文本]更改为编辑文本)
• We have revised the text to address your concerns and hope that it is now clearer. Please see page 5 of the revised manuscript, lines 9–20, and page 6, lines 1–20.(我们对案文进行了修订，以解决你的关切，并希望案文现在更加清楚。请参见修改后的原稿第5页9-20行，第6页1-20行。)
• To address the reviewer’s concern, we have rewritten this sentence as follows:(为了解决审稿人的担忧，我们将这句话改写如下:)
• We have fixed the error/ removed…(我们已经修复了错误/删除了…)
• This observation is correct. We have changed.(这个观察结果是正确的。我们已经改变了。)
• We have made the change. The new sentence reads as follows.(我们已经做了改动。新句子的内容如下。)

要求语言修改

• Thanks for your constructive suggestion, which is highly appreciated. We have carefully scrutinized the manuscript, and made corresponding revisions including some typos, grammatical errors and long sentences, etc. This manuscript has been revised extensively according to the reviewers' constructive suggestions. In addition, the expression of the manuscript has been improved with the help of a native English speaker.(谢谢你的建设性建议，我非常感激。我们对原稿进行了仔细的审阅，并进行了相应的修改，包括一些错别字、语法错误和长句等。根据审稿人的建设性意见，本文进行了广泛的修改。此外，在英语母语人士的帮助下，手稿的表达得到了改善。)

拼写错误

• thanks for your careful checks. We are sorry for our carelessness. Based on your comments, we have made the corrections to make the word harmonized within the whole manuscript.——感谢您的仔细检查。我们对我们的粗心感到抱歉。根据您的意见，我们进行了更正，以使该单词在整个手稿中协调一致。
• We feel sorry for our carelessness. In our resubmitted manuscript, the typo is revised. Thanks for your correction.——我们为自己的粗心感到抱歉。在我们重新提交的手稿中，错字已被修改。感谢您的指正。
• We sincerely thank the reviewer for careful reading. As suggested by the reviewer, we have corrected the “XX” into “XX”.——我们衷心感谢审稿人的认真阅读。根据审稿人的建议，我们已将“XX”更正为“XX”。

语言润色

• We tried our best to improve the manuscript and made some changes to the manuscript. These changes will not influence the content and framework of the paper. And here we did not list the changes but marked in red in the revised paper. We appreciate for Editors/Reviewers’ warm work earnestly and hope that the correction will meet with approval.——我们尽最大努力改进手稿，并对手稿进行了一些修改。这些变化不会影响论文的内容和框架。在这里，我们没有列出更改，但在修订后的文件中用红色标记。我们衷心感谢编辑/审稿人的热情工作，并希望更正得到批准。
• Thanks for your suggestion. However, we do invite a friend of us who is a native English speaker from the USA to help polish our article. And we hope the revised manuscript could be acceptable for you.——谢谢你的建议。但是，我们确实邀请了一位来自美国的母语为英语的朋友来帮助润色我们的文章。我们希望修改后的手稿能被您接受。
• Thanks for your suggestion. We have tried our best to polish the language in the revised manuscript.——谢谢你的建议。我们已尽最大努力润色修订稿中的语言。

要求补充文献

• Thanks for the references, which are now included in the revised manuscript. Specific references are listed as follows: XXX.(感谢您提供的参考资料，现已包含在修改后的原稿中。具体参考资料如下:XXX。)
• We sincerely appreciate the valuable comments. We have checked the literature carefully and added more references on ___ and___ into the INTRODUCTION part in the revised manuscript. ——我们真诚地感谢您的宝贵意见。我们仔细检查了文献，并在修订稿的引言部分添加了更多关于___和___的参考资料。
• As suggested by the reviewer, we have added more references to support this idea (文献1.2.3...). ——正如审稿人所建议的，我们添加了更多的参考文献来支持这一想法（文献 1.2.3...）。

创新性不足

• Thanks for your comments, which is highly appreciated. As for the novelty, it is well-known that XXX. However, XXX. Although there are some reports focusing on XXX, the focus on XXX has been rarely explored. Especially for XXX that features some unparalleled merits like XXX, only several reports underlined XXX. More unfortunately, little attention was paid to XXX. In this report, 重申创新.Thanks again to the reviewer on suggesting to further improve this manuscript, we have studied comments carefully and have made corresponding corrections which we hope meet with approval.(谢谢你的评论，非常感谢。至于新奇，众所周知，XXX。然而,XXX。虽然有一些关于XXX的报道，但对XXX的关注却很少。特别是对于XXX这样具有无可比拟优点的XXX，只有几篇报道强调了XXX。更不幸的是，很少有人关注XXX。在本报告中，:再次感谢审稿人对本文进一步改进的建议，我们仔细研究了审稿人的意见，并做了相应的修改，希望能得到审稿人的认可。)
• 谢谢您的意见。我们这篇论文原稿的引言部分没有把新意、重要性写清楚；鉴于此，我们已经加强了引言部分，把创新性强调出来。本文的创新性就在于……

补充实验，可以完成

• The manuscript has been revised accordingly to clarify the above concerns.....
• 如果补的实验没有得到预期的结果（一般找文献来支撑相应结果）。As suggested by the referee, we have tried our best to verify XXX by____. However, no ___ signal has been detected in our synthesis system. Other researchers also found that it is very difficult to obtain a well-resolved hyperfine structure for ___. As suggested in the literature, ___; Some researchers even think that it is impossible to obtain a well-resolved hyperfine structure by .(根据推荐人的建议，我们已经尽力通过____对XXX进行核实。然而，在我们的合成系统中没有检测到___信号。其他研究人员也发现，要获得一个分辨率很高的超精细结构是非常困难的。如文献所述，;一些研究人员甚至认为不可能通过_____获得一个分辨率很高的超精细结构。)

补充实验，但是无法完成

• We agree with the reviewer that further elaborating on this point using new data would be helpful. However, we believe that expanding our dataset is neither feasible, given the costs involved, nor would significantly support our argument. For this reason, we chose not to make this change, but we added the following sentence to paragraph 3 in the discussion: “Though having a larger dataset would offer further insight…”.(我们同意审稿人的观点，即使用新数据进一步阐述这一点将有所帮助。然而，我们认为，考虑到所涉及的成本，扩展我们的数据集既不可行，也不会显著支持我们的论点。出于这个原因，我们选择不做这个更改，但我们在讨论的第3段中添加了以下句子:“尽管拥有更大的数据集将提供进一步的见解……”。)
• We apologize if our original Figure 2 did not show…. We did not intend to…. We have modified the figure and hope that it is now clear that…. We believe that adding a new figure, as the reviewer suggested, would be unnecessary given that our new Figure 2 shows….(如果我们的原始图2没有显示....，我们深表歉意我们不打算....我们已经修改了这个数字，希望现在很清楚....鉴于我们的新图2显示了....，我们认为没有必要像审稿人建议的那样添加一个新图)
• We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful suggestion and agree that it would be useful to demonstrate that…; however, such an analysis is beyond the scope of our paper, which aims only to show that…. Nevertheless, we recognize this limitation should be mentioned in the paper, so we added the following sentence…(我们感谢审稿人富有洞察力的建议，并同意证明……然而，这样的分析超出了我们论文的范围，这篇论文的目的只是为了表明....然而，我们认识到这一局限性应该在论文中提到，所以我们增加了下面的句子…)
• …was not the scope of this study. Keeping the reviewer’s comment in mind, we prefer to quantify this effect using the model system in our following works.(...不是这项研究的范围。记住审稿人的评论，我们更愿意在接下来的工作中使用模型系统来量化这种影响。)
• 做这个实验。如果实验结果能说明问题，则要把结果补充到论文中。反之，要展示、分析数据，告知审稿人已做此实验，但没有得到有价值的结果，并阐明原因。
• 如果实验条件或者客观条件不允许。We agree that more studies would be useful to understand the details of interaction and enhancement. At this point, we do not have the necessary tool-set to study the __. We hope, in the future, to employ ___ techniques to determine . This study is beyond the scope of this report which focuses on answering critical questions regarding the . We note also that since submission of our manuscript there has been a publication by Alex Bell and Martin Head-Gordon at Berkeley showing that Fe on Au2O3 has enhanced OER activity with DFT calculations (Ref. 79). We have added this citation and reference to the manuscript.(我们同意，更多的研究将有助于了解相互作用和增强的细节。在这一点上，我们没有必要的工具集来研究。我们希望，在未来，采用___技术来确定。这项研究超出了本报告的范围，本报告的重点是回答有关_______的关键问题。我们还注意到，自我们的手稿提交以来，伯克利的Alex Bell和Martin Head-Gordon发表了一篇文章，表明通过DFT计算，Fe在Au2O3上增强了OER活性(参考文献79)。我们在原稿中添加了这条引文和参考文献。)

若干审稿意见之间存在冲突

• As we received conflicting advice from another reviewer, we decided to make the change they suggested, because…. We hope this was the right decision.(由于我们从另一位审稿人那里得到了相互矛盾的建议，我们决定做他们建议的更改，因为....我们希望这是一个正确的决定。)