英语写作技巧
天龙八部简洁版
1. 描述类经典句
用法：
...很重要，...很必要
句型：
_______ plays an extremely important role.
____ is of utmost importance.
Nothing is more important than _______.
It is generally accepted that environmental protection plays an extremely important role in our lives.
2. 重视类经典句
用法：
重视...
句型：
pay attention to …
attach importance to …
As the post-90's generation, we should attach great importance to maintaining good health.
3. 议论类经典句
用法：
...产生了争议
句型：
opinions vary greatly when it comes to ...
当谈及到我们是否该控制物质的欲望，大家观点不一。
Opinions vary greatly when it comes to whether we should control our desire for materialism
Opinions vary greatly when it comes to whether one should work for a state-owned company or a joint venture.
4. 结果类经典句
用法：
...对于...产生了影响
句型：
exert a positive/negative/great impact on …
It cannot be denied that economic growth exerts a great impact on our environment.
It goes without saying that economic growth exerts a huge impact on our environment.
5. 见证类经典句
用法：
在某时某地发生了...（该句型实际解释为：...见证了...）
句型：
… witness … （用时间和地点做主语）
过去几年里，越来越多的父母把孩子送到艺术学校去。
（改写成：过去几年见证了越来越多的父母把孩子送到艺术学校去。）
The past several years have witnessed a sharp increase in the number of students who would like to go abroad for further study.
6. 使动类经典句
用法：
...使得...
句型：
enable/allow/render sb. to do …
Virtual Reality, which allows us to communicate more effectively, has captured a great deal of public attention.
7. 引出类经典句
用法：
...成为了...重要的社会问题
句型：
(1) … has arisen as one of … （很适合开头句）
孩子的教育已经成为最重要的社会问题之一。
Children's education has recently arisen as one of the essential problems.
Children's education has recently arisen as one of the essential problems.
8. 趋势类经典句
用法：
越来越…
句型：
More and more people …
An increasing/ A growing number of people …
People in mounting numbers …
People in mounting numbers tend to pay much attention to how to process information effectively.
六脉神剑（起承转合独评）
我把六脉神剑总结为四个问题，更便于阅读。
1. "两点"怎么表述？
To begin with, … Furthermore, …
2."顺接"和"转接"怎么表述
顺接：
as a result
进一步 what's more
此外 in addition
转接
however
3."总结"怎么表述
总结
all in all, in a word
如前所述
Given the factors I have just outlined, I personally maintain that….
4."个人观点"怎么表述
In my opinion, from my perspective.
第二段凑字数：万能句子（替换主语）
经济类：
1. In recent years, China is marked by rapid economic growth and continuous technological innovation.
近年来，中国以快速的经济增长和持续的技术革新为特征。
人口类：
2. However, as the job market is getting gloomy and competition is becoming fierce, it is increasingly difficult for college undergraduates to find a decent job.
然而，随着劳动力市场变得低迷，竞争日趋激烈，对于大学生来说找到一份好工作越来越困难。
社会类：
3. With the quickening pace of urban life and ever-increasing pressure, people in growing numbers are suffering from either the physical or mental problems.
随着不断加快的都市节奏以及日益增长的压力，越来越多的人正遭受到身体或心理的问题。
技术类：
4. Technological innovation really brings us much convenience, exerting a huge impact on our traditional cultures.
技术革新给我们带来了很多便利，同时也对于传统文化产生了巨大的影响。
教育类：
5. Reading is of utmost importance for one's life. Reading can increase our contentment when we are cheerful and happy, and can lessen our pain when we are sad and lonely. Reading can also help people relax and unwind. All of us can savor a wide range of experiences through reading. All in all, reading increases our knowledge and skills, broadens our horizon and widens our circle of friends.
阅读在我们生活中扮演着至关重要的角色。阅读可以在我们高兴快乐时增加我们的满足感，也可以在我们难过孤独时减少我们的痛苦。阅读也可以帮助人们放松心情。我们可以通过阅读品尝广泛的经历。总而言之，阅读增加了我们的知识和技术，扩展了我们的视野，扩大了我们的交际圈。
环境类：
6. We are suffering greatly from the environmental destruction. Environmental protection is caring about ourselves and ensuring environmental sustainability for future generation.
我们正在遭受到巨大的环境破坏。环境保护是关怀我们自己，并且为我们的后代确保环境的可持续性发展。
家庭类：
7. There exist some misunderstandings and generation gaps between parents and their children. However, everyone has the duty to take care of their parents, especially when they are old and sick. Also, an increasing aging population will have enormous consequences for any society.
在父母和子女中存在着一些误解和代沟。然后每个人都有责任去照顾自己的父母，尤其当他们年老多病。而且，越来越多的老龄化人口对于任何社会都具有巨大的影响。
精神类：
8. Life is ten percent what you make it and ninety percent how you take it. The value of life lies not in the length of days, but in the use we make of them. So having right values in life is very important for us, especially youngsters.
生命之百分之十在于你如何塑造它，百分之九十在于你如何对待它。生命的价值并非在于天的长度，而是在于我们怎么利用他。因此具有正确的价值观非常重要，尤其是年轻人。
模板
模板1：描图类（1）
如果题干提示写解释现象，即用这个模板。
第一段：描图
The picture captures a very special scene: ____________(描图图片). Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. _____(图片含义).
第二段：现象解释
Strikingly, in contemporary society, this sort of phenomenon is becoming increasingly common and eye-catching. Two fundamental factors could account for this social phenomenon. First and foremost, this problem stems from ________(原因1名词). _______(具体阐述). Moreover, this situation can be seen as a consequence of ________(原因2名词). _______(具体阐述).
第三段：提倡解决（如果觉得长，两种解决方法选一种即可）
The following ways can be adopted to advocate(好现象)/curb(坏现象) this social phenomenon. On the micro level, I believe it is every individual's duty and it is high time that we should take action. Since my own voice is too weak to be heard, I hope the authority and mass media should be held accountable. Only by this means can we lead to a better life.
模板2：描图类（2）
如果题干提示写正反观点，即用这个模板。
第一段：描图
The picture captures a very special scene: ____________(描图图片). Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. _____(图片含义).
第二段：正反观点
Opinions vary when it comes to _________(主题). Some argue that ________(正方观点). However, those who strongly oppose are not among the minority. They hold that _____(反方观点).
第三段：个人观点
Given the factors I have just outlined, it can be concluded that the question quite depends on personal choice. However, I am fully convinced that _______(自我观点).
模板3：引言类
第一段：引言
_______(主题词) has captured numerous attentions from the general public, just as the saying goes "_______"(名言照抄). The saying denotes that _______(名言含义).
第二段：现象解释
Two fundamental factors could account for this principle. To begin with, _______(原因1+具体阐述). Moreover, _______(原因2+具体阐述).
第三段：个人观点
Given the factors I have just outlined, it is advisable to _______ (总结). To the best of my knowledge, _______(发表自己观点).
模板4：图表类
第一段：图表
The given table offers a glimpse of _____(图表主题). _________(图表内容). Simple as it is, this chart symbolically characterizes a status quo.
第二段：现象解释
First and foremost, this problem stems from ________(原因1名词). _______(具体阐述). Moreover, this situation can be seen as a consequence of ________(原因2名词). _______(具体阐述).
第三段：趋势说明
Given the factors I have just outlined, it can be concluded that _______(总结).
(如果好的趋势) As regards to this social tendency, I believe it is inspiring and positive. As this trend is still in its infancy, we believe it will no doubt go further and lead to future prospect.
(如果坏的趋势) From my perspective, I realize this trend needs to be slowed down since it has already poses negative impact on our society.
1. Directions: Suppose you are asked to give advice on whether to major in science or humanities at college, write an essay to state your opinion. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. (2017年6月六级第一套)
思路：
天龙八部 2+3
万能背景 7+20+2+14
积极结尾（有改动）
It goes without saying that higher education has captured a great deal of attention from the general public. Opinions vary greatly when it comes to whether one should choose science or humanities at college. If I were you, I would like to take science as my major.
There are two fundamental factors contributing to my option. To begin with, nowadays as the job market is getting gloomy and competition is becoming fierce, it is increasingly difficult for college undergraduates to find a decent job. However, learning science can increase our knowledge and skills, broaden our horizon, and make us wise. A great number of positions require candidates who study science. Furthermore, in recent years, China is marked by rapid economic growth and continuous technological innovation. Technological innovation really brings us much convenience, exerting a huge impact on our traditional cultures. Science is useful and inseparable from our life.
Given the factors I have just outlined, I maintain that science is of utmost importance to our life and our future. The time is right for us to take full advantage of ample existing opportunities. We should do our utmost to advocate the study of science. (193 words)
2. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on innovation. Your essay should include the importance of innovation and measures to be taken to encourage innovation. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. (2016年12月六级第一套)
思路：
天龙八部 1+5+4
万能背景 12+14+15+7+23
消极结尾（有改动）
It goes without saying that innovation plays a key role in developing national economy. The past several years have witnessed a sharp increase in the number of scientists who are making new breakthroughs in their fields. This will definitely exert a huge impact on our society.
Considering the importance and necessity of this situation, I feel responsible to discuss it further. To begin with, time and again, science and technology has created wonders and even miracles, thus fortifying our belief in it. Technological innovation really brings us much convenience, exerting a huge impact on our traditional cultures. For example, the popularity of computers and Internet access has laid a solid foundation for the development of e-commerce. It has significantly changed our ways of shopping. Furthermore, as the job market is getting gloomy and competition is becoming fierce, it is increasingly difficult for college undergraduates to find a decent job. We need to create more jobs for youngsters. Innovation is the key point to take the first step.
All in all, I personally argue that we should lay great emphasis on innovation. The fundamental way in which the government advocates this spirit is to promote quality-oriented education. The mass media should also join in the efforts in educating the citizens. Only through concerted steps can our society have more peace and harmony. (221 words)
3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the use of robots. Try to imagine what will happen when more and more robots take the place of human beings in industry as well as people's daily lives. (2016年6月六级第一套)
思路：
天龙八部 6+1+3
万能背景 7+9+17
双刃剑结尾（有改动）
The development of technology has brought us unprecedented transformation, which is inevitable and undeniable. Robots, which are capable of exhibiting artificial intelligence, have emerged into our vision, and tend to play an increasingly important role in our life. Consequently, there is much controversy over what will happen if robots replace human beings in the future.
Considering the significance and necessity of the present situation, I feel responsible to discuss it further. To begin with, if robots play our roles, the job market is getting gloomy and competition will become fierce. It will be increasingly difficult for college undergraduates to find a decent job. Furthermore, there will be an increasing upward mobility of the younger generation and dramatic changes in traditional concepts. Students will try to get the opportunity to increase their knowledge and learn to be independent. As a result, they will not be replaced by robots.
Based on my personal experience, I can safely draw a conclusion that the robot is a double-edged sword. Whether it is a boon or a bane will be discussed for a number of years to come. However, one should make sensible use of technology, being a master rather than a slave of it. (203 words)
