初中英语优秀作文分析-002Who stole the cupcake-谁偷了纸杯蛋糕?

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记忆树

1 One Sunday afternoon, Leslie was at home with her kids, 3-year-old Angel, 6-year-old Carl, and 7-year-old Tony.

翻译

一个周日的下午，Leslie和她的孩子们在家，他们是3岁的Angel，6岁的Carl和7岁的Tony。

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周日

句子结构

One Sunday afternoon 时间状语 一个周日的下午

Leslie 主语 ，was 系动词 是，at home 表语 在家，with her kids 介词短语做状语 和孩子们

3-year-old Angel, 6-year-old Carl, and 7-year-old Tony 定语，3岁的Angel，6岁的Carl和7岁的Tony

2 After making a call outside, Leslie found one of the cupcakes on the kitchen table missing.

翻译

在外打完电话后，Leslie发现厨房桌子上的一块纸杯蛋糕不见了

简化记忆

纸杯蛋糕

句子结构

After making a call outside 时间状语 在外打完电话后

Leslie 主语 ，found 谓语 发现，one of the cupcakes on the kitchen table 宾语 桌子上的一块纸杯蛋糕

missing 补语 不见了

3 She noticed one kitchen chair was pulled out a little.

翻译

她注意到一把厨房椅子被稍微拉出了一些

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椅子

句子结构

She 主语 她，noticed 谓语 注意到，one kitchen chair 宾语 厨房的椅子，was pulled out a little 宾补 被稍微拉出了一些

4 When Leslie asked who stole the cupcake,all the kids shook their heads.

翻译

当Leslie问谁偷了纸杯蛋糕时，所有的孩子都摇了摇头

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孩子

句子结构

all the kids 主语 所有的孩子，shook 谓语 摇， their heads 宾语 他们的头

When Leslie asked who stole the cupcake 时间状语从句

When 引导词，Leslie 主语，asked 谓语 询问，who stole the cupcake 宾语从句 谁偷了纸杯蛋糕

who stole the cupcake 宾语从句

who 是疑问代词 主语，stole 谓语 偷，the cupcake 宾语 纸杯蛋糕

5 Leslie then said, “Well, I know who did it.”

翻译

Leslie接着说：“嗯，我知道是谁干的。”

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谁干的

句子结构

Leslie 主语，said 谓语 说，引语 “Well, I know who did it.”

I 主语 我， know 谓语 直到，who did it 宾语从句 谁干的

who did it 宾语从句

who疑问代词， did 助动词，It 宾语

6 “Carl, it must be you,” Leslie said. “Here is how I know it was you.

翻译

“Carl，肯定是你，”Leslie说。“这就是我怎么知道是你干的。

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Carl

句子结构

it 主语，must be 谓语 推测 ，you 宾语 你

Here 主语 这里，is 系动词， how I know it was you 表语从句 我怎么知道是你干的

how I know it was you 表语从句

how 引导词，I 主语 我，know 谓语 知道 ， it was you 宾语从句 这是你

7 First, your little sister is too small to reach the table and she isn’t strong enough to move the kitchen chair.

翻译

首先，你妹妹太小，够不到桌子，她也搬不动厨房椅子。

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妹妹

句子结构

First 副词 表顺序首先，your little sister 主语 你小妹妹，is 系动词，too small 表语 太小，to reach the table 结果状语 不能够到桌子

She 主语 她，is not 系动词，strong enough 表语 足够强壮，to move the kitchen chair 目的状语 不能移动厨房的椅子

8 Tony hurt one of his toes.

翻译

托尼的一个脚趾受伤了

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托尼

句子结构

Tony 主语，hurt 谓语 伤害， one of his toes 宾语 他的一个脚趾

9 He is in a bad mood because he has been worried about the coming basketball game.

翻译

他心情不好，因为他一直担心即将到来的篮球比赛。

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心情不好

句子结构

He 主语 他，is 系动词，in a bad mood 表语 心情不好

because he has been worried about the coming basketball game 原因状语从句

because 引导词，he 他 ，has been worried about 谓语 担心，the coming basketball game 宾语 即将到来的篮球比赛

10 It was impossible for him to think about taking a cupcake.

翻译

对他来说，想要拿一块纸杯蛋糕是不可能的。

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不可能

句子结构

It 形式主语 ，was 系动词，impossible 表语 可能，for him 介词短语 对他来说

to think about taking a cupcake 真正主语 想要拿一块纸杯蛋糕

11 So it must be you, my young boy.

翻译

所以一定是你，我的小男孩

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一定是你

句子结构

it 形式主语 ，must be 猜测 是，you 表语 你，my young boy 同位语 对you 的进一步解释

12 As a result,Carl wasn’t allowed to enjoy cakes with the others.

翻译

结果，卡尔不被允许和其他人一起享用蛋糕。

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享用蛋糕

句子结构

As a result 状语 结果， Carl 主语，wasn’t allowed 谓语 不被允许，to enjoy cakes 补语 享用蛋糕，with the others 状语 和其他人一起

13 But he did learn something valuable.

翻译

但他确实学到了一些有价值的东西

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学到

句子结构

he 主语 他，did 助动词，learn 谓语 学习，something valuable 宾语 有价值的东西

14 It’s important to admit what one has done and not to take anything secretly!

翻译

承认自己所做的事情并且不偷偷拿东西是很重要的！

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承认

句子结构

It 形式主语，is 系动词，important 表语 重要的

to admit what one has done and not to take anything secretly 主语

to admit 不定式承认， what one has done 宾语从句 某人做的事情

not to take anything secretly 不定式 不偷偷拿走

原文

One Sunday afternoon, Leslie was at home with her kids, 3-year-old Angel, 6-year-old Carl, and 7-year-old Tony. After making a call outside, Leslie found one of the cupcakes on the kitchen table missing. She noticed one kitchen chair was pulled out a little. When Leslie asked who stole the cupcake, all the kids shook their heads. Leslie then said, “Well, I know who did it.”

“Carl, it must be you,” Leslie said. “Here is how I know it was you. First, your little sister is too small to reach the table and she isn’t strong enough to move the kitchen chair. Tony hurt one of his toes. He is in a bad mood because he has been worried about the coming basketball game. It was impossible for him to think about taking a cupcake. So it must be you, my young boy.”

As a result, Carl wasn’t allowed to enjoy cakes with the others. But he did learn something valuable. It’s important to admit what one has done and not to take anything secretly!