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12+3个原因
✔ 社会原因:收入 | 媒体 | 科技 | 政策 | 竞争 | 经济
✔ 个人原因:赚钱 | 眼界 | 人际 | 健康 | 压力 | 开心 | 时间
总1:社会原因
1.lt is increasing personal incomes arising from economic growth that permit more residents to well afford to {X}.
正是由于经济增长带来的个人收入增加,使更多的居民能够很好地负担起{X}。
跟“消费”(或者说花钱),都可以用“收入增加”这个原因模板。
2.Compared to the past, widespread publicity for {X} has not only sparked considerable interest among people, but also motivated them to {Y}.
与过去相比,对{X}的广泛宣传不仅引发了人们极大的兴趣,而且促使他们{Y}。
任何题材都能套用“媒体宣传”这个原因模板,但要尽量切题
3.Thanks to the technological advances, {X}, which represents the latest in technology, has been designed to be powerful as well as portable, prompting more people to {Y}.
得益于科技进步,{X},作为最新科技的象征,已经被设计得非常便携和功能强大,这促使更多人{Y}。
凡是跟“科技”能扯上关系的题材都能用这个原因模板,比如手机、电脑、汽车、互联网、人工智能等。
4.Were it not for the fact that the policy on {X} has been widely advocated in recent years, we would fail to witness the popularity of {Y} among the public.
如果不是因为近年来广泛提倡{X}的政策,我们将无法见证{Y}的流行。
政策支持是非常万能,包罗万象。除了太偏个人的话题(如手机阅读,春节送礼等)
5.A recent study suggests that the more competitive our society is, the more likely people will be to {X} in order to improve themselves /ease their troubled minds /make more money. And herein lies the social reason for this phenomenon.(不要漏了这最后一句)
最近一项研究表明,社会竞争越激烈,人们就会越想通过{X}去提高自己/缓解压力/赚更多的钱。这是该现象的社会原因。
“社会竞争”让人感到疲惫、喘不过气来,它要么使人更加拼命(如加班,兼职,考研等),要么使人“躺平”(如旅游)。所以正负现象都能用。
6.Although the economy has grown rapidly in recent years, there follows a series of problems, which is best exemplified by the fact that {X}.
虽然近些年经济实现了快速发展,但一系列的问题也随之而来,其中,{X}现象便是一个最好的例子。
“经济发展副作用”,不是说正面现象就一定不能用。特色餐厅很流行,蛮欢快的基调,但转念一想,餐馆流行的背后肯定也存在铺张浪费的问题,该模板句就能用上了。
总2:个人原因
7.1It is no secret that thousands of people, especially the young, are lured into {X} by the prospect of better jobs and more money. Indeed, it’s human nature to desire a better life.
很多人,特别是年轻人,因为希望拥有更好的工作和赚更多的钱,从而被吸引去{X},这已经不是什么秘密。确实,想要更好的生活是人之常情。
“要赚钱所以做某事”和“缺钱所以做某事(下句)”可以解释人类的许多行为。
7.2.It is no secret that lack of money is one of the reasons why {X}
缺钱是{X}的原因之一,这已经不是什么秘密。
反面:因为想省钱
7.3Ordinarily, it will work out cheaper to {X}, and this factor attracts the interest from more and more consumers desirous of saving money.
一般来说,{X}会更省钱,这吸引了越来越多热衷于节约的消费者的兴趣。
因为想省钱
8.Few would disagree that {X} will enable people both to sample a different way of life and to broaden their horizons, which underlies the popularity of {Y}.
fuel the boom in… 促进….流行替换underlies…
很少有人会反对,{X}不仅能让人们体验到不同的生活方式,而且能拓宽他们的眼界,这是{Y}流行的原因。
咋一耳听上去比较“新奇”的,或者能接触到很多新人和新事的流行现象,都可以用拓宽眼界来解释。
9.1In the course of {X}, people stand a good chance of winning more friends /cementing emotional ties, not to mention the fact that they can ease their loneliness.
在{X}的过程中,人们有机会结识更多新朋友 /巩固情感纽带,更不用说他们还能排遣孤寂。
“因为要人际交往”,凡是跟“友情”或“亲情”能扯上关系的话题,可以直接上手该句。
9.2Handling interpersonal /working relationships really drains the vast majority of people, so {X} is only to be expected.
处理人际/同事关系使大多数人筋疲力尽,所以{X}也就不足为奇了。
反面:因为人际关系差。人际交往中有的人会因此疲惫。本句对应着后者。
10.In order to promote physical and emotional well-being, numerous people have developed a habit of {X}.
为了促进身心健康,许多人养成了{X}的习惯。
“健康”
11.1{X}, the antidote to stress, can free people from a competitive existence, as well as enable them to restore faith in life.
{X},是舒缓压力的良药,既能将人们从充满竞争的生活中解脱出来,也能使他们重拾对生活的信心。
因为要缓解压力
11.2Word has it that the pressures which stem from work, study and family have overwhelmed more and more adults, who therefore {X}.
有消息称,源于工作、学习和家庭的压力已经压垮了越来越多的成年人,因此他们{X}。
因为压力很大
12.Notable among these reasons is the fact that {X} now constitutes such a source of delight that it can bring pleasure to people, especially the younger generation, and lift their spirits.
一个显著的原因是,{X}如今被认为是一种快乐源泉,它能给人们(尤其是年轻人)带来快乐,并使他们振奋精神。
找乐子,凡是能跟“快乐”或“放松”搭边的话题,都能使用这个语料。
13.Leading a busy and hectic life, human beings become increasingly willing to replace {X}, which wastes time and energy, with {Y}, whose advantage is time-saving.
由于生活忙碌,人们逐渐用{Y}(它的优势是节约时间)来替代费时费力的{X}。
“省时间”逐渐变成许多人(尤其是年轻人)的生活日常,近三年(2020,2021和2022)考到的手机阅读、独自锻炼和网上购物,某种程度上也反映了人们生活和学习方式的改变——往更省时和便捷的方向发展。
动态图趋势描述词
具体如何描述趋势的语句
动词副词法
The proportion/number of {X}(xxxx’share ) Ved+adv
there be句型
There was an enormous growth in the proportion/number of….
时间作主语
The X years witnessed xxx in the proportion/number of in
趋势作主语
xxxx in the proportion/number of X from 数值 in 年份 to 数值 in 年份
动态图
模板
To identify the trend in {名词,为图标标题},the chart aggregates the relevant data from {Y} to /and{Z}. (具体描述图标趋势动态变化词语见上面的总结)Obviously, the purpose of this chart is to disclose that people become more willing to {X}in today's society.
From my standpoint, there are several cogent points can clarify this phenomenon.
3个原因,主题为王
To begin with, Besides, Furthermore
The conclusion that follows from these reasons is that a combination of {X1}, {X2} and {X3} contributes to the popularity of {Y}.Based on the aforementioned result, I believe that {X} is /are bound to surpass {数值} by the end of {Z}.
为了弄清{名词,为图标标题}的变化趋势,该图表汇总了{Y年至亿年的相关数据。 显然,图表目的是揭示如今人们变得更愿意去{X}这一社会现象。
我认为,有几个令人信服的观点可以解释这一现象。
根据这些原因得出的结论是,{X1}, {X2}和{X3}一起,促成了{Y}的流行。基于上述结论,我相信,到{Z}年底,{X}必将超过{数值}。
静态图
模板
To ascertain {how/why/what ...}, the (pie/column) chart aggregates the relevant data. To be specific,{数据1} accounted for the largest proportion ({数值1}%) of all the {X}. Next came {数据2} comprising {数值2}%, almost twice as much as /slightly larger than {数据3} ({数值3}%), while {数据4} was /were the lowest, {数值4}%.Obviously, the purpose of this chart is to disclose that {X} has /have won favor with the general public in recent years.(Undisputedly, {X} has developed into a social phenomenon at the center of public attention).
(坏现象流行用be prevalent among代替won favor with,注意时态)
People can't help but wonder what is the origin inevitably provoking this spectacle.
3个原因,主题为王
To begin with, Besides, Furthermore
The conclusion that follows from these reasons is that a combination of {X1}, {X2} and {X3} contributes to the popularity of {Y}.Based on the aforementioned result, I believe that the percentage of {X} is bound to surpass {Y} next year.
为了弄清楚{X},该图表汇总了相关数据。具体来说,{数据1}在所有{X}中占最大比例({数值1}%)。其次是{数据2},占{数值2}%,它几平是{数据3}({数值3}%)的两倍(或略大于),而{数据4}的比例最低,为{数值4}%。显然,该图表的目的是揭示近年来{}很流行。(⽏庸置疑,(主题词)这⼀社会现象已经发展成公众关注的焦点。)
人们不禁要问,到底是什么原因引发了这一现象?
根据这些原因得出的结论是,{X1}, {X2}和{X3}一起,促成了{Y}的流行。基于上述结论,我相信,下一年{X}的占比一定会超过{Y}。
如何应对文字材料类作文
本质上就是把“表”换成了“字”而已。我们依然可以提取出“...很流行”这样的中心论点
提取出中心句后,第二段的写作流程跟图表作文一模一样
1)总起:网上社交很流行,在我看来,其原因如下; 2)理由 1+例子:因为人们想要人际交往,所以选择网上社交。举个例子,我的朋友 Jack,最近爱上了网上聊天,原因是爸妈不让他出去,但待在家里又无聊。【直接举朋友的例子,内容很好写,改写原文即可】 3)理由 2:科技发展在某种程度上也促进了网络聊天的发展【科技发展角度】
4)理由 3:很多人选择网上聊天的原因是缓解压力【缓解压力角度】
5)……(略,自己选“2 个理由+1 个例子”共三句话即可)
同理,第三段也依然是【总结+预测未来】的固定结构。
新增模板句-首段(重点)
第一段记住两个模板句即可。
2.3.1 首段第一句:引入主题(近期主题词引发讨论)
英文模板:Never in recent memory has there been so much discussion about
whether individuals should+一个动词短语(抄材料即可).This is a matter that
touches everyone.
中文翻译:在人们近期的记忆中,大家从未如此频繁地讨论过我们是否应
该……。这是一个关乎每个人的事情。
2.3.2 首段第二句:点明文章主旨,并赞同/否定作者观点
英文模板:As far as I’m concerned, the popularity of{主题词}is unstoppable,
which coincides with the author.
中文翻译:就我而言,{主题词}的流行是不可阻挡的,这点跟作者不谋而合。
第二段的例子怎么写?
其实很好写,只需要记住一个框架(如下加粗部分),然后通过改写原文来
填补空格——
英文模板:Take my friend Jack, for example. He told me that because his
parents prohibit him from wandering, he has lost himself in online chatting recently.
中文翻译:举个我朋友 Jack 的例子。他告诉我,因为他爸妈不让他外出玩
耍,所以他最近沉醉于网络聊天。