剑桥雅思写作高分范文ESSAY92

Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. State your point of view.

 

Women are thought to be better parents, but nowadays many daughters are closer to their fathers. To me, this is not the result of Electra complex but because males can also excel at parenting.

It must be admitted that women are generally better parents. This has something to do with their disposition. Women are usually caring, gentle and patient. Their special bond with the children often cannot be understood by men. Their better verbal and communication skills also help to endear them to the children, especially when they are young. So it is easy for a mother to outdo her husband at raising children. However, their victory is not always guaranteed.

Men can also be tender and loving. They often entertain deep affection towards their kids though they may not show it in an explicit way. They may seem cold, strict and uncaring, but when they are really understood, they gain kids' love and respect. Unlike a mother's love which is tender and profuse, a father's love is subtle and profound. The time spent between a father and his children may be brief but productive, and often involves some heart-to-heart talk about work, people and life.

In fact, male influence is essential but sometimes lacking because fathers are often busy supporting the family. Kids raised by a single mother often suffer from a lack of confidence. They often feel insecure. The courage and hardiness of a father can nourish similar traits in a child.

Fathers are often not very much involved in raising children because of their work. In fact, they are just as capable of becoming good parents. They can often exert a unique influence on their children.

 

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