六级写作整理

1. 现象阐述

　　描述现象，产生原因，建议和总结观点

　　Nobody coulld have failed to notice the fact that __ has become agrave problem with which modern citizens are confronted . As far as i know ,there are some __. Apperently enough ,we can find numerous examples in our society, however, what makes many people worried is that this issue has not arrowsed enough concern .

　　As far as i am concerned. there are numerous factors accounting for the phenomenon mentioned above ,but the following might be the critical ones. First and formost , ... Besides, ... Last but not least ,...

　　From my point of view ,there are a number of ways in which __ can tackle mentioned above ,but the following might be the indispensible ones, ___

　　Based on the above analysis ,we can naturally come to a safe conclusion that __ . As modern collage students , it is  our repsonsibility to shoulder the burden of inheriting and developing cultural constructing our nation's future . Therefore ,it is essential that we should __, Besides ,in order to __ .We should try to __, Only by dong so can we become qulified talents to make great contributions to our homeland.

 

 

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　　Nobody could have failed to notice that __ has evolved into a grave issue confronting modern citizens. To the best of my knowledge, there are some __. Apparently, we can find numerous examples in our society; however, what adds to people's concern is the insufficient attention this issue has garnered.

In my view, multiple factors account for the aforementioned phenomenon, with the following being the critical ones. First and foremost, ... Additionally, ... Last but not least, ...

　　From my standpoint, there are various ways in which __ can address the issue mentioned above, and the following might be the indispensable ones, ___.

　　Drawing on the above analysis, we can naturally conclude that __. As contemporary college students, it is our duty to bear the responsibility of inheriting and developing culture, shaping our nation's future. Therefore, it is crucial that we __. Furthermore, to __, we should strive to __. Only by doing so can we become qualified talents and make substantial contributions to our homeland.

 

 

 

　Nobody could have failed to notice that __. To the best of my knowledge, there are some __. Apparently, we can find numerous examples in our society; however, what adds to people's concern is the insufficient attention this issue has garnered.

 

　　In my view, multiple factors account for the aforementioned phenomenon, with the following being the critical ones. First and foremost, ... Additionally..

 

　　From my standpoint, there are various ways in which __ can address the issue mentioned above

 

　　Drawing on the above analysis, we can naturally conclude that __. As contemporary college students, it is our duty to bear the responsibility of ..

 

 

2. 对比/ 正反观点

　　when it comes to __, opinions differ from one to another  or different people  hold different opinions.　　

　　There are a number of individuals who hold the positive opinion. They believe that __ is  advantages for __, what makes them convinced is that __.In addition, they clam that __.

　　others, however, hold the opposite view. they mantain that it is unnecessary indispensible to __. one reason they cite is that __. Another significant cause is that __.

　　Persionally, nothing is more important than __. on the one hand ,it is a fact that __. on the other hand , no one can deny the fact that __. Therefore only by doing so can ___.

 

 

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　　When it comes to __, opinions vary widely. Different individuals hold diverse perspectives on this matter.

 

On one side of the spectrum, there are those who express a positive viewpoint. They argue that __ brings significant advantages for __. What firmly convinces them is the idea that __. Furthermore, they emphasize that __.

 

　　Conversely, others firmly maintain the opposing stance, asserting that __ is neither necessary nor indispensable. One cited reason is that __, and another significant factor is __.

 

　　From a personal standpoint, nothing holds greater importance than __. On one hand, it is an undeniable fact that __. On the other hand, no one can dispute the reality that __. Therefore, only through such actions can we achieve __.

 

3. 图表

1） 柱状/ 曲线

　　As we can see from the diagram. remarkable tendecy that has occurred in the sphere draws our attention. As is apparently depicted in the chart, __ soared from () in 1990 to () in 1994. While ,as a sharp contrast, __ decreased from () in 1990 to () in 1994. In addition, () was almost the same in 1991 and 1992

2) 饼图

　　As we can see from the diagram , remarkable tendecy that has occurred in the sphere draws our attention. the pip(chart) shows the percentage of __.The spending on A ranks first ,accounting for A% of the total. The next significiant expending items are B,C ,which are B% and  C% respectively. And the D takes up D%.

分析原因

　　First and foremost , as a matter of fact, with the rapid development of our economy and society, __

　　In addition, we must admit that this tendency also has a lot to do with __

　　Last but not least, __is another sianificiant factor that can not be ignored 

结尾

　　好的趋势

　　Just with many other things, it's not easy to reverse the changes that have already taken place that has already take form

　　不好的趋势

　　In order to improve the situation, we should find several solution to it , On one hand, __ .On the other hand , __