Narrative writing revision

In 221 BCE, I-Qin shi huang became the First Emperor of China.A storyteller told me an interesting tale about Nuwa, the Great Mother Goddess.Then an idea appeared in my mind. I was determined to find the lost stone. So it would help me build a strong empire.
And so, i demanded that a road to the mountain be built (In the futher i will famous for my building projects. One of them is called the Great Wall of China.). Then i took an army of thousands to Rong Cheng mountain. As i ascended the steep mountain trail, my boots sank into the damp earth.The air grew cooler, and the scent of moss hung heavy. Jagged rocks jutted from the path, their surfaces worn smooth by centuries of wind and rain.Finally, there it was -a massive stone, half-buried in the soil,its surface etched with cryptic symbols.I was on the top of the mountain looking the citizen in town under the mountain,ambition and successful passion were burning in my heart since i got the magic stone
After a long search, finally the stone was found on the mountain!I held up the stone high,which sparkled like cherished jewelry in the sunlight. I held a sacred ceremony to worship it.Soon after, my empire did become stronger and more peaceful! Over a thousand years later, a writer of popular Chinese operas loved the story about my trip to find the sacred stone. It inspired him. He wrote the phrase “instant victory upon arrival on a horse.” He used it in one of his earliest operas.Later, people continued to use the phrase to refer to an instant victory or quick success.