Narrative writing revision

1)the process of making a digital story
First,I choose the story which I’m familiar with, including Disney Fairy Tales, some Aesop's Fables stories and other stories.Second,I search on the internet after I’ve chosen the story and see the original English text.Then I shifted the perspective to the first-person, putting myself in the shoes of one of the character.Finally,choose the proper words and expressions.And find some pictures and background music,then,record the voice.
2)what's your gains
First, I have gained some new vocabulary and expressions by encountering unfamiliar words and phrases and then looking them up for study. Additionally, I have improved my ability to connect paragraphs more smoothly compared to before. Furthermore, during this writing session, I have mastered the use of personal pronouns.
3)what's the challenge
In terms of advanced sentence structure, I still encounter difficulties in my writing. Additionally, I have issues with managing the length and scope of my articles.
The grammar and language use could be improved to enhance the clarity and impact of the narrative
4)how do you think of this DMC project
While I have made progress compared to before, there is still significant room for improvement. My writing and ability to organize materials remain areas of weakness that I need to strengthen.