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The effects of and solutions to global warming
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With private cars counting a larger proportion of public transport nowadays,the challenge we face is getting more and more severe.Global warming,a nonnegligible issue for humans,is getting unprecedented attention.Generally speaking,the effect of global warming is undoubtedly immense.The following are the reasons.
First and foremost,global warming will definitely exert a substantial influence on global water sorage.As a matter of fact,merely 30 percent of the water on the Earth is available.It is unbelievable to imagine what it will be like if the Earth gets warmer.Definitely,many people will face the scarcity of water.
What's more,what should also be taken into consideration is the rising of the sea level.Obviously,global warming brings about the melting of the ice,which directly leads to the rising of sea level.Some countries like Netherlands or Japan will face the plight,for the reason that they need to immigrate otherwise their country will be submerged.It is really a considerable economic loss.
Getting the gist of the effect of global warming,it is worth considering the countermeasure against it.
Cutting down the utilization of private cars should be considered firstly.We cannot lay more emphasis on the significance of taking public transport instead of private ones.It may be the most effective solution allowed for the advent of private cars has aggravated the condition in recent years.
Moreover,the essential solution to the issue is to develop new energy sources.After all,among all the factors contributing to global warming,the most fundamental one is the energy we use is not clean energy.It will definitely be a dramatic improvement.
Although tackling global warming is indeed an arduous mission,humans have time and confidence to overcome it.By knowing how it affects us and the approach to tackling it,we can make a green future.

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posted @ 2023-04-24 14:16  N0zoM1z0  阅读(0)  评论(0编辑  收藏  举报